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Because you guys deserve it ...
And I apologize ahead of time for any spelling and grammar mistakes.

Table of Events (Roughly):
-- Naruto Becomes Hokage
-- Hinata and Neji is attacked by enemy ninja.  Naruto releases the "good" seal on the Kyuubi.  Hinata is saved and Jiri is laced with white chakra from the Kyuubi.  Hinata goes into labor and gives birth
-- Fast forward a few years
-- Team Kitsune (Sumi Sarutobi, Jiraiya "Jiri" Uzumaki, Kennin "Ken" Rock, Unari "Uno" Inuzuka) escort a nobleman's daughter to her fiancée
-- Honohi spends time with Ikana and Koichiyo -- events include foiling a theft at the market place, a schoolyard fight and a spat with Mukizu Hyuuga
-- Naruto returns to Konoha with bad news of the peace treaty
-- Team Kitsune is at home and trains (some abilities are revealed)
-- Chia Nara is at a Suna Village Council where it revealed that they want to join forces with Iwa because they don't want to be a "pawn"
-- Honohi steals Toad Scroll
-- Chia returns home with bad news
-- Team Kitsune is asked to infiltrate Iwa and locate a mole; but before they leave, they are shown new technology developed by Ame Yokawa
-- Team Kitsune arrive at Iwa under disguise.  Jiri is made out to be a blind man, Arufa is transformed into a human woman, Uno has to wear clothing to hide his tattoos and Ken learns the Iwa captial has a ban on alcohol sale and consumption
-- Team Kitsune discovers the mole and plot on how to make contact; meanwhile, Ken suffers alcohol withdraw syndrome and has a hallucination in public
-- While Ken is unconscious and Arufa stays by his side, Team Kitsune get's caught in a trap.  Ken finally wakes up and convinces Arufa to let him help his teammates escape
-- Team Kitsune returns to Konoha; Naruto assigns Raiu Hatake to watch/guard Jiri.  
-- Naruto calls a meeting of his peers
-- Trio of the Tainted Mirage and a Iwa strike force attack Konoha and kidnap Honohi and Mukizu (who got in their way)
-- Some stuff happens ^^;
-- Jiri learns of Iwa's reasons for war was Tsuchikage's desire to have Jiri help him find eternal life
-- Force from Konoha (Naruto, Team Kitsune, Neji, Tenten, Ikana and various other nin) go and recover Honohi and Mukizu.  Meanwhile, Konoha is attacked again by a larger force since their Hokage was absent.  Kakashi directs Konoha's forces while Naruto is away.  It is revealed that Gaara and other Suna nin have heeded Naruto's call for help and were in Konoha to help defend against any attacks
-- Uno is mortally wounded
-- Jiri uses part of his own life chakra to save Uno and falls into a coma
-- Days later, Jiri awakens and filled with guilt for his family and friends being hurt because of him, leaves Konoha for Iwa
-- More stuff happens ^^;
-- Team Kitsune struggle to save Jiri
-- Jiri and Sumi fight the Tsuchikage
-- ?????
-- Profit!
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But seriously, that's it in a nutshell.  There are A LOT more details and sublets to the overall plot, but you get the gist with what I wrote up above.  Below is a lot of the info pertaining to each character ...

Hokage Naruto Uzumaki
-- Shortly after being declared hokage, Hinata and Neji are attacked by enemy nin.  In order to save his wife and unborn child, Naruto releases the seal on Kyuubi (the one with the scroll Jiraiya gave him) and an enormous amount of light chakra is released into the surrounding area.  The Kyuubi is destroyed and his chakra is expelled.  But those who were caught up in the chakra (which traveled all the way to Konoha and could be seen from Suna) was surged with healing power.  Thousands of people collapsed in pain as the chakra coursed through their bodies and healed their old injuries.  Hinata is revived, but is forced into labor, even though she is months premature.  Frantic, Naruto summons Ma and Pa frog and with their help, Jiri is born.  It is revealed that Jiri's light chakra attunement was due to being at the apex of the Kyuubi's chakra release
-- With the Kyuubi destroyed, Naruto is able to channel Sage chakra even better; even merge with his summons
-- He is made Superior Kage of all ninja nations except Iwa, who refuses to join the ninja treaty

Kakashi Hatake
-- Is married to Ayame (the ramen girl)
-- Has a son named Raiu Hatake
-- Goes into retirement after Naruto is made hokage and starts to write adult novels.  He also tends to the ramen shop and enjoys the simple lifestyle
-- When Naruto releases the Kyuubi's chakra, Kakashi collapses in pain.  Raiu runs to help his father after hearing him scream.  He opens the door to see Kakashi rip out Obito's sharingan for fear it would be destroyed from the healing chakra.  He, in turn, gives the sharingan to his son in hopes of "continuing Obito's legacy"
-- Kakashi doesn't make another appearance in the doujin until Konoha is attacked the second time by Iwa nin while Naruto is off to save Honohi from her kidnappers.  The Tsuchikage made the mistake in forgetting how formidable a ninja Kakashi was and underestimated him.  The Iwa assault force was annihilated under Kakashi's direction.

Maito Gai
-- Becomes captain of the newly formed Konoha Police Force
-- Wants Kennin Rock to takeover as Captain after he retires
-- Defends Konoha during the second Konoha Invasion by the Iwa assault force

Sai
-- Becomes leader of Root
-- Does not have a family

Kiba Inuzuka
-- Is killed by Kyogan in the first Konoha invasion by Iwa forces
-- Reveals he is Unari Inuzuka's real father and Hana had adopted Uno because Kiba "was too much of a loser to raise a son".  But he was proud of Uno and wished he had the courage to be a real father
-- Akamaru howls before letting himself die peacefully at Kiba's side

Shino Aburame
-- Has a son (unnamed)
-- Scarifies his insects to swarm and destroy one plague-infected locus from reaching his son
-- With his help, Zetsubo's weaknesses are discovered (an insect user)

Ino Yamanaka
-- Is the village psychiatrist and diagnoses Ame Yokawa's OCD and removes him from active duty

Shikamaru Nara
-- Becomes Naruto's advisor and strategist and an overall, whipped husband

Gaara
-- Struggles to maintain peace in his village between himself as Kage and the village council.  While he want's to keep Suna's alliance with Konoha, the village council wants to join forces with Iwa.  After discovering moles in his village, he sends his daughter Koichiyo to live in Konoha temporarily
-- Helps defend Konoha during the second Konoha invasion, stating his bonds to Naruto was greater than any paper treaty

Honohi Uzumaki
-- Shows no potential of being nothing more than an average ninja; but still passes her ninja exams (Iruka is her teacher at the academy)
-- Steals the toad summoning scroll, but runs into Ken (literally).  He helps her flee Naruto's clones, but he tells her that everyone has to work hard to be strong a ninja and convinces her to return the scroll.  Naruto let's her sign it soon after
-- Is kidnapped along with Mukizu Hyuuga by Kojihina, Boseki, Zetsubo (Trio of the Tainted Mirage) during the first invasion of Konoha
-- Saves Mukizu from being killed and wraps him in her shirt to keep him from bleeding to death during their rescue
-- Becomes close friends with Mukizu after returning to Konoha

Jiraiya "Jiri" Uzumaki
-- Possesses rapid regeneration due to his light chakra, but still feels pain upon injury
-- Does not age
-- Can heal severe injuries in others like a loss of limb, but at the cost of life chakra (possible the recipient will not survive)
-- Cannot revive dead unless he sacrifices part of his own, personal life chakra (doing so puts him into a coma for a few days)
-- Kage from Iwa (who is the main villain) is searching for a technique for immortality (similar to Orochimaru).  He refuses to agree to a peace treaty unless Kusa country is merged with Earth country and Jiri is handed over into their possession; stating Konoha was far too powerful to have both Naruto and a ninja of Jiri's ability.  But secretly, the Iwa Kage wants to utilize Jiri to give him eternal life
-- Naruto refuses to give up Jiri and avoids telling his son the truth.  Instead, he assigns Raiu Hatake to guard Jiri and keep an eye on him
-- Tsuchikage tries to convince Jiri to join the Earth Country by offering him scrolls from the Village Hidden in the Heavens; a lost city that was destroyed centuries ago and was known for utilizing light chakra
-- Is highly disturbed when he realizes he will outlive the people he loves and forces himself to accept it would be best for him to not have a family.
-- After Jiri finds out about the Tsuchikage's demands, he runs away from Konoha to avoid war
-- Tsuchikage takes Jiri to the lost Village Hidden in the Heavens in hopes of him learning the secret to eternal life.  After Sumi Sarutobi arrives to help him, Tsuchikage reveals his ability which is letting his conscious mind leave his body and possess other people (similar to the Yamanka technique, but only a lot more powerful).  The only way to save Sumi is for Jiri to use the Dead Demon Consuming Seal technique to remove the Tsuchikage from her.  But after the Demon God swallows Jiri's soul, it becomes "ill" and vomits forth all the souls he has swallowed over the centuries (even releasing the old hokages) and releases them into the afterlife.  It is discovered that Jiri's light chakra "poisoned" the Demon God, who is made solely of dark chakra.  While caressing Jiri's corpse, Sumi witnesses his soul be returned to his body and he is revived.  But his hair is now blue/black, and his eyes are normal byakugan.  He has lost his light chakra and is no more powerful than a normal Hyuuga.  Jiri considers this to be a blessing as he is no longer "blind" from an overly powerful byakugan, is now mortal and will no longer be sought out by their enemies

Sumi Sarutobi
-- Arms are covered in scars from multiple surgeries to repair her arms after they were crushed in her first chuunin exams
-- Her first sexual encounter ever was with Kishikan while being caught up in his genjutsu.  She is later ashamed that, even though she was Konoha's most powerful genjutsu user, she wasn't able to break free -- nor prevent herself from being aroused.  When given the opportunity, she isn't able to kill Kishikan in battle and let's him escape
-- Throughout the story, Sumi slowly develops romantic feelings for Jiri and starts to see him as being a caring and loving person
-- She later meets up with the Iwa nin who crushed her arms when she was a child.  She is terrified and unable to speak.  But Team Kitsune comes to her side and both Uno and Ken put themselves between her and the Iwa nin.  It is then that Sumi learns how much respect her team has for her
-- Sumi and Raiu struggle in their fight against Zetsubo due to him using insects.  Though she is able to disable Zetsubo, she was not aware of his "self-destruct" ability.  Raiu Hatake sacrifices himself to save her at the last minute.  After mourning his loss, she goes to the Village Hidden in the Heavens to help Jiri.  After being possessed by the Tsuchikage, she is unable to prevent herself from attacking Jiri.  But after a tense internal struggle, she is able to regain enough control to threaten to kill herself.  It is at that time that Jiri used the Dead Demon Consuming Seal technique and purged the Tsuchikage from her conscious.  She cradles Jiri's corpse and weeps his death.  But after his soul is returned to his body, Jiri looks over her face with and tells her, "she's beautiful" because he no longer has the overactive byakugan and can now see her face clearly.  Sumi embraces him and kisses him deeply in return

Kennin "Ken" Rock
-- Started to practice "drunken kung fu" when he was a teenager because he was ashamed that he couldn't use chakra for ninjutsu or genjutsu
-- It is discovered after Chia Nara returns from Suna with bad news, that she and Ken has a sexual relationship and have had such a relationship since they were teenagers.  She refuses to kiss or show any sign of intimacy with Ken and makes it abundantly clear he is no more than a "f*ck buddy".  But having known him for years and even cared for him when he was sick from drunken kung fu training and being able to relate to his addiction, Chia keeps coming back to him for companionship and he accepts it
-- After team Kitsune travels to Iwa for a spy mission, Ken suffers alcohol withdraw syndrome because he is unable to drink due to Iwa's alcohol prohibition.  While eating lunch in a market, Ken suffers a severe hallucination from DT's and thinks he is getting swarmed by large insects.  Uno is injured while trying to help him and after he is restrained by Arufa, Sumi Sarutobi sedates him with a jutsu.  Team Kitsune was surprised to learn how reliant Ken had become to alcohol.  Thanks to Jiri, Ken survives his withdraw, but only after being unconscious for several days
-- Fights Kojihina (female puppet user, was Sasori's student, body was a puppet made of bronze) late in the story.  During the fight, his queue (long hair braid) is blasted off after dodging an attack.  He is also severally poisoned and realizes he will not survive the fight.  Therefore, he drinks a small bottle of extremely potent alcohol, then opens 6 gates (which increases the rate in which the poison moves through his system) and uses both the strength he has gained from opening the gates and chakra control he has learned from his mother (Sakura Haruno), and punches Kojihina over a mile into a mountain where she is destroyed
-- It is thought that Ken will die from the poison, but Sakura (who is traveling with a troop from Konoha in search of Team Kitsune, saves him at the last moment).  Unfortunately, he suffers too much internal injury and is no longer able to drink alcohol.  He decides to retire as a ninja shortly after Jiri is recovered

Unari "Uno" Inuzuka
-- Has a crush on Ikana Hyuuga
-- Admits that even though he thinks Maefuyu Mitarashi is a "crazy bitch", he does have sexual encounters with her on a regular basis, much to Ken's good humor
-- Is able to combine lightning and wind within his belly and expel it like a sonic attack
-- Finds out after Kiba Inuzuka's death that Kiba was his real father and Hana was actually his Aunt; he never finds out who his real mother was
-- Declares Kyogan to be his mortal enemy after the Iwa-nin killed Kiba.  Later, while helping rescue Honohi and Mukizu, Uno accidentally kills Koketsu, Kyogan's dire bear who sacrificed himself to save his companion.  Shortly there after, Koketsu's body morphs into his true form -- Kyogan's twin brother.  Kyogan merge's with his brother's corpse and he becomes a giant rotted dire bear.  In this new, permanent form, Kyogan is vastly stronger and completely feral.  He attacks and mortally wounds Uno who is by now, low on chakra.  Before destroying him completely, Ken kicks Kyogan away and takes Uno's wounded body at a breakneck speed towards Jiri.  Uno dies before Jiri can heal his wounds; but, not being able to help his friend sends Jiri into a rage and he expels a large amount of his own life chakra to revive and heal Uno.  Uno's body and life is restored, but all of his tattoos and beloved scars are purged from his body.  While recovering in the hospital, Uno is visited by Ikana and admits his true feelings for her.  The two spend the night together.
-- Later fights Boseki (uses souls as sacrifices to summon large kami spirits) and defeats the rogue sand-nin after nearly dying from chakra exhaustion

Arufa
-- Loathes other dogs and has a hard time being an animal with moderate intelligence.  She wishes she could find others of her species that she could "have a decent conversation with"
-- With the help of Uno, she often takes a human form with fluffy black hair, dark tan skin, and fur boots.  While Team Kitsune was in Iwa on a spy mission, she takes a human form as the Iwa capital have strict rules against dogs off leash.  She struggles to walk on two legs and is often reminded to use the bathroom (rather than cop a squat in the middle of the road) and to use eating utensils.  While away on the spy mission, she develops a crush on Ken after he "rescues" her from a bad encounter with lewd thugs.  She stays by his side while he is recovering from alcohol withdraw
-- She is very shaken up when Uno barely escaped death and found comfort with meeting Raiu Hatake's dog summons
-- She takes a human form to help Uno after their fight with Boseki and carries him until they meet with Ikana

Chia Nara
-- Is at the Suna council when it is revealed that they want to break the peace treaty with Konoha, she is outraged and returns to Konoha with bad news
-- Has a physical relationship with Ken, but refuses to accept the fact that she is emotionally attached to him; feeling any relationship is "too much of a pain in the ass"
-- Defends Konoha from the second invasion and is proud to reveal the Suna forces who have come to the leaf ninjas' aid (ninja include: Gaara, Koichiyo, Temari, and various other sand nin).  It is shown that her, her father (Shikamaru) and mother (Temari) have a group combo attack called "Raining Shadows".  Temari uses a large gust of wind to make Chia airborne with her large umbrella, in doing so, she creates a large shadow over enemy-nin where Shikamaru can use it to increase the potency of his shadow control attacks.  The attack is usually followed with Chia impaling an enemy with her umbrella
-- She helps nurse Ken back to health after Jiri is recovered from Iwa

Mukizu Hyuuga
-- Is kidnapped during the first Konoha invasion
-- Is forced to fight while captured and one of his arms is severed at the shoulder as a result
-- Honohi Uzumaki saves him from a death blow and keeps him from bleeding to death
-- Neji Hyuuga demands that Jiri regenerates Mukizu's arm, but Mukizu refuses when he learns it may cost him his life, or the life of Jiri.  This is a sign that he has finally grown up and become less selfish
-- He becomes close friends with Honohi after they are returned to Konoha and she helps him learn to live with his disability

Koichiyo
-- Finally finds her confidence after hearing Honohi is kidnapped and helps defend Konoha along with her father during the second invasion of Konoha
-- Learns to utilize her water chakra attunement with her father and together they perform a "Quick Sand" technique

Aki Sarutobi
-- Kills the Iwa nin that broke Sumi's arms during her first chuunin exam
-- Protects Konoha during both invasions

Ame Yokawa
-- It is revealed that Ame became an orphan because his village was killed by a disease.  Ame was a toddler when he was recovered by traveling Konoha nin and they suspected he had been living in filth and squaller for days
-- After nearly getting Team Konohamaru killed on multiple occasions and being unable to stop frantically washing his hands for 45 minutes, he is tested by Ino Yamanaka and is diagnosed with severe obsessive compulsive disorder.  He is relieved from active duty shortly thereafter
-- He later develops new technology used by Konoha ninja (and envied by other countries).  Such technologies include: a primitive form of Kevlar, radio headsets that can be embedded in ANBU helms and chakra bracelets that are attuned to stones and can track the wearer's chakra level and health status.  He also utilizes computers (a simple 16-bit system)
-- Is outraged when Kishikan hacks his computer during the first Konoha invasion and disorganizes his "perfect filing system"
-- Has a blood technique that allows him to create bubbles with any source of water (I created this guy long before Utakata came out :X).  This includes fatally creating bubbles in a person's blood.  But because a mass amount of bubbles is "disorganized and sloppy", he rarely uses the technique

Ikana Hyuuga
-- Has a long standing crush with Unari "Uno" Inuzuka
-- Spends a good deal of her time with her cousins, Honohi and Koichiyo
-- Was one of the firsts to spot the Iwa attackers during the first invasion of Konoha
-- Was part of the recovery squad when going to save Honohi and Mukizu
-- Witnesses Jiri revive Uno from death
-- Visits Uno in the hospital while he was recovering (against her father's wishes), tells him her true feelings and shares an intimate encounter with him that night
-- Helps Uno return home after recovering Jiri from Iwa and never leaves his side again

Maefuyu Mitarashi
-- Body is covered in chain-designed tattoos.  She is able to summon these chains and uses them to choke or kill her enemies via asphyxiation
-- After multiple failed attempts at seducing Unari "Uno" Inuzuka, she turns her sights on Hagi Akimichi
-- Defends Konoha during the second invasion

Hagi Akimichi
-- Defends Konoha alongside his father, Choji, during the second Iwa invasion
-- Does not complain with the added attention from Maefuyu

Raiu Hatake
-- Son of Ayame (the ramen girl) and Kakashi Hatake
-- Name means "Thunderstorm"
-- Same age as Sumi and Aki Sarutobi
-- ANBU Captain
-- Summons dogs
-- Has Obito's sharingan -- was given to him after Naruto released the white chakra from the Kyuubi
-- Uses a technique called "Raikiri Storm".  Essentially he creates a ball of lightning much like the Raikiri, only twice as large (can only be used twice a day).  He holds it above his head and each bolt of lighting that stretches out from the Raikiri Storm is able to cut through almost anything.  He uses this technique when surrounded by enemies -- they are usually cut to pieces
-- Develops a small crush on Sumi, which causes Jiri to become jealous (an unusual emotion for him)
-- Sacrifices himself to save Sumi in her fight with Zetsubo

Boseki
-- Rogue ninja from Suna
-- Is in his thirties, but actually looks like an old man.  The kami spirits he summons take years off the end of his life.  He has learned to bypass this cost by storing and sacrificing other human souls
-- Summons a kami that allows him and his troop to enter it's belly and pass from one location to the next via the spirit world
-- Killed by Uno

Zetsubo
-- Rogue ninja from Suna
-- Is infected by the plague and covered in rotting flesh.  Uno is unable to track him via scent as he smells so horrendous
-- Uses locus.  Each insect is capable of spreading the plague
-- Sacrifies self to kill Raiu

Kojihina
-- Ex-student of Sasori when he was a Suna ninja and she followed him after he abandoned his village
-- Her body is a puppet encased in bronze
-- Unlike her teacher, she doesn't use puppets.  Each of her limbs could be turned into a chakra canon and fire intense "lazers" at her foes
-- Killed by Ken

Kyogan
-- Iwa ninja
-- Kishikan's teammate
-- Koketsu is his brother and takes a form of a bear companion
-- Comes from a clan prone to having twins.  One of the twins takes the form of a dire bear (large bear) and fights as a companion alongside their sibling
-- Kills Kiba in the first invasion of Konoha
-- After Uno kills Koketsu, Kyogan merges with his brother's dead body and becomes a giant rotted dire bear.  This new form is permanent and cannot be reversed.  After returning to Iwa, the Tsuchikage orders his death, stating, "He is worthless to me now".  Kishikan incapacitates the other Iwa ninja and leads Kyogan away from the village and back to his clan, where they peacefully unmerge the two brothers, at the cost of Kyogan's life

Kishikan
-- Iwa ninja
-- Kyogan's teammate
-- Has only one expression: sadness
-- Is a genjutsu expert and possesses an eye bloodline technique.  This technique splits his pupils in two, and causes them to spin in a hypnotic fashion.  His main ability is affecting the brain to forget the last few seconds; hence Kishikan's namesake of "deja vu".  Most ninja who encounter him do not remember him or think he was just a random thought
-- After being tracked down by Team Kitsune, he captures Sumi in a genjutsu and seduces her.  Sumi later realizes that since Kishikan always makes people forget they ever saw him, he had chosen her to be the one who would always remember him.  Because of this understanding, Sumi stops herself from killing him at a later date when she was given the opportunity during the rescue of Honohi and Mukizu from their kidnappers.  Little did she know that he had actually spared her life when Team Kitsune was infiltrating the Iwa capital under disguise
-- After saving his teammate from a horrible death, Kishikan left Iwa and never returned




Though they make appearances, nothing notable happens with any of the other canon characters.

So there you have it.  It would have been a huge project to finish that doujin, but at the time, I really wanted to.

Sorry again, guys.  :forgiveme:


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What happend to all the pics D: whee!